Monday, February 8, 2010

My List. Rough draft




This is my list project. It runs long. Let me know what you think I should get rid of. Also, I don't know if you can tell but I wanted my list to come off as a sort of story. I don't know if you will see/hear that in this. And also is the type of list clear at the end of the piece?

Actually, nevermind. I'm going to start over.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2010 at 1:53 PM

    Hannah,
    I'll be interested to hear where you go next. There are definitely some compelling phrases, juxtapositions and twists and turns in there. If you were to stick with this one (and I think you're moving one), I'd suggest a 50% haircut...and more precise modifier at the end (what kind of Jeopardy categories, or where from...)

    Look forward to the next draft...

    -stephanie

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