My List. Final draft.

So this is the end product of my explorations with this project. Let me know what you think because I changed it up a bit from my rough draft. I hope the list make sense after the reveal at the end. Thanks guys.

My List. Rough draft

This is my list project. It runs long. Let me know what you think I should get rid of. Also, I don't know if you can tell but I wanted my list to come off as a sort of story. I don't know if you will see/hear that in this. And also is the type of list clear at the end of the piece?

Actually, nevermind. I'm going to start over.

On the Road. The Final Draft. Or The Closest I've Gotten.

So I've been over and over this. I put sounds and effects in to add to the narrative and then I take them out because I don't like them or how I'm using them. And I take parts of the story out and then put them back in. I think I have spent too much time on this over the last two days and what with being sick which you might be able to tell by the sound of my voice (froggy croak) at this point in time my head is just full of fuzz. This is what I have. Let me know what you think. Thanks, friends.