Final project? i think.

Final Project? Let me know what you think stephanie. Rewrote the poem. Didn't necessarily do the thins I said I was going to but i think its okay.

FInal Project

This is a draft of my final project. I plan on pursuing it further when I submit it on my portfolio for this class. But here it is right now.

Another day another draft.

So here is what I have been working on with my final project but I got some really helpful feedback from Stephanie and Megan today. I am going to rethink the narration, maybe put in present tense and try to give it more energy. I have a lot of work to do before next week so don't be surprised if my final draft sounds vastly different than this one.

The newest audio portrait revised.

Some subtle changes. The ending is different. I extended his viola playing so the ending isn't as abrupt and I edited out the bit about him going to the dentist because it wasn't necessary.

Just really rough final project start. a sketch if you will

Here is my start on the final project. I interviewed my mom and dad over the phone about their relationship and this event specifically. I have a lot of work to do though to get from here to what I what my piece to turn out like when it is finished. Let me know what you think.

The Final Audio Portrait?

Here is the final audio portrait that I came up with. Let me know what you think. I changed the ending around. I hope that it works.

Another draft. Audio portrait.

Hey folks,
Here is another go at my audio portrait. I'm not sure about the ending or whether I should edit it down more. Let me know if you can before the weekend is over so I can fix it up before Monday. Thanks so much.