Sunday, March 14, 2010
For Realsies Though. The Finalest of the Final Draft. So Far.
Here is the newest version of my Sonic Haiku. I changed the writing and I hope that my intention with this piece got through. Unfortunately I was not able to re-record the waves. I am going home in a couple of weeks so I plan on making some more changes even after this. Hopefully it will not be as windy which brought about some technical difficulties last time over spring break. Anyway, I hope that you enjoy my piece and feel free to leave comments.
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I really like this final version of your haiku. I think the comparison of the waves to the animals makes us listeners think more while we listen rather than you simply telling us in the first piece.
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